Snow falls across pine lands,
mountains taht stand as still as air
Flakes of white land in rythmic patterns on the frosted ground,
covering the needles of the skyscraper trees
Breaking the crystal green sight,
a flash of flame flashes through the midday wilderness
Poking his pointed ebony nose into the gray sky,
he sniffed the rushing wind for a trace of shelter
As he trotted across the brush,
winter's white spots his rusted red pelt
Finding a hole under thick snow,
the fox digs,
empting his sleeping place
Once the frozen water has gone,
he squirms into the small underground space,
tucking his paws into his fluffed white chest,
to settle a day's rest
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this is really good...lol i dont know if u meant to but u used a lot of good alliteration...like ..."winter's white spots his rusted red pelt..." and
ReplyDelete"...a flash of flame flashes through the midday wilderness..." (i had trouble saying the last one lol) :) but overall good job!!